MalFromed's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Why just pick one]

It's been awhile, and from what I can see, that time has been put to good use. Your art has definitely gone up in quality since the last time I saw it.

I have no major critique this time. I just wanted to let you know you did a good job.

[Warfish]

Amazing job!

I especially like how you did some of the outlines. I'm genuinely impressed with how they look. Making them look textured was a fantastic idea. I just wish you had done it for all the outlines. Also, love them goofy looking koi fish fellas (they're my new sons). There are also a few little things that irk me, but they're just minor nitpicks not worth bringing up.

Again, amazing work!

Azpher-Omega responds:

Thank you!! I'm not sure what you mean by textured outlines, you mean just how the light source is kind of making them disappear sometimes? The differences in thickness perhaps?
I'm so, so happy with all of these fish designs, they are so cute and terrifying!!
You can nitpick if you want within reason haha, I was staring at it for ages before scheduling the post until I determined I couldn't think of how else to improve it, heh.

[King Luculent]

This fella looks pretty rad. I especially dig the fragmented floating crown he's got. Not too wild about the shading, though. It's not atrocious or anything. I just think you could have gone with some better color choices for it. Then again, I'd take anything I'm saying with a grain of salt, especially if you've seen anything I've done recently. I'm still trying to figure out what ancient god I need to offer sacrifice to so that I may obtain good color choices. Maybe I should just swallow my pride and look for a pre-selected color palette. But I'm not sure how well that would teach me to do it on my own. Anyways, you're pretty talented. I'm sure in time you'll undoubtedly improve.

As for that whole, making a world comment. If you ever do decide to make your own world, I'd love to see or hear about it. I always love hearing about the world's people make in their minds. Making a world is one of the more interesting things someone can do with their imagination. I myself have made a few worlds in my time. Wasn't until a few years back I made one that I finally liked. One day, when I'm good enough, I'll bring it to life.

As for you not uploading for a while, I'll tell you the same thing I would tell anyone else. Don't stress yourself out too much. Sometimes other things in life just take priority. But I also understand that it's a constant struggle to stay relevant. You got to find your own pace and then improve it from there. I'm sure you'll figure it out.

[rat]

You go through all that trouble to make this rat look nice and fancy only for it to scoot its butt along the ground... I'm reminded every day that the majesty of nature does not actually exist.

In all seriousness, this looks kind of cute. But you maybe should have gone with a colored background or something that would have made that second ear visible. I had a hunch it existed.

Memorizor responds:

advice taken

[Cheep Cheep]

Pretty nice Cheep-cheep. Every time I think about them, I can't help but feel that they're underrated.

[Devon]

I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but I really like how his horns could also double for his eyebrows. It's an interesting idea.

[Pineapple and a Cactus]

Prickly Pals.

Whom neither of which belong on a pizza.
Yeah, I'll be that jerk that brings up the pizza thing every time they see a pineapple. My opinion is superior. You cannot convince me otherwise.

[1 Pokemon A Day, Day 375: Indeedee]

I want to tell you that you misspelled gaze, but I like it better this way.

[Goat lady]

Drawn entirely with your fingers, huh?

Well, you know what that means.

This one's going right up on the fridge!

Seriously though, this is quite interesting to look at. I especially like how you did the fur on the leg. I'll have to make a note of it.

DeadkatNG responds:

Thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it! And yeah, I had a lot of fun making the fur, it felt super satisfying.

[1 Pokemon A Day, Day 373: Meltan]

Good luck, Metlan-chan!

Just remember to be careful. One wrong move and you could wind up in a wacky anime plot line.

I couldn't stand to see another young person taken down one of those awkward and over exaggerated paths again. I don't think my heart could take it...