MalFromed's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cries blood in Spanish]

0²'s been watching those YouTube™ Beauty™ Tutorials eye see.

SOUNDBBABE responds:

yas queen, slay that damn planet

[Ackwaur]

Man, your monsters are wonderful! Looking through your gallery, I've not seen one I've hated. It disappoints me that there aren't more eyes on your stuff. Either way, I just wanted to let you know your stuff is stellar!

Azpher-Omega responds:

Awwww thank you!!! Well, I haven't been scouted yet, so I'm hoping when that happens I'll get some more recognition. I'm just glad anyone likes 'em though! I sure like making them ^_^

[an OC i made]

Alright, I'll bite. Does the knife have anything to do with her lack of pants?

OFERISH responds:

nope, my initial idea was that she cuts open the black holes with the knife, so .. thats why she has a knife, i also drew her in her pajamas or "home-outfit"

[Dungeon Warrior (Full Party)]

Alright, no more goofing. Now that the picture is done, I have some actual critique. I'll start with the background. It's serviceable, but I think a more standard cave aesthetic would have been of better use. That is if they are in a cave. Which is part of the issue. I'm just making an assumption on their location. I feel that the background is a little too abstract. Moving on to the characters, they're alright. Starting with the monster, it looks goofy, dumb and dangerous. That's my favorite combination of things. I love it. At the moment, I cannot think of anything that would make it better aside from a bit more detail. Next up is the Healer. Honestly my favorite of the bunch. Most likely due to how expressive you made them and previously mentioned jokes regarding dodgeball. From what I can see from their outfit, I like it quite a bit. That also might be because I have a soft spot for clothing details and things of the sort that are oversized. Such as the stitches on the gloves. Let's move on to the Knight. Again, what I would call serviceable. I don't really have much to say about them, mostly because they just don't stand out all that much. But, if I had to find something I liked about their design, I'd say I like the belt, it's cute. Personally though, if I had designed it, I would have looked for a way to make it seem like it was blushing instead of actually blushing. Then, we have the Witch. If I am to be completely honest with you, I get the feeling you didn't 100% know what you wanted to do with this character's design. And if that's the train of thought I'm going with, I'd say put them back in the oven. They need more time. Now about the lighting in this picture, I can offer you no proper criticism in this department. Sadly, I don't practice lighting as much as I should, so I would view it as out of place to criticize yours in any way. Lastly, I have to bring up that torch. It clashes horribly with everything else. To be more specific, the flame. You really should have stylized it. As it is, it stands out like a sore thumb. And that's about it. I feel comfortable with the score I've given this. But in case this came off as a little too negative, keep pushing forward. I wish to see you improve.

Until next time.

Oh, before I hit submit, I wanted to say this. The animation gifs that you've previously posted seem pretty alright. I know animator, so again, I can offer no proper critique. Just know that I think they look energetic and fun.

JustRaiho responds:

Wow Thank you so much for this review, I agreed with you the antorch was a big deal honeslty firts i try to draw the flame but ending look like a lamp or iven a toy soo i decide to make like that just make the ligth more natural( but still looking really wrong i will fix that issue) and about me animation im soo happy you like them i allways make sure to make them fast and smoth soo they took some more time to make but not worry im will make time to them, thank again <3

[Fun Hour]

I don't know, man. Her luck is already pretty bad. Walking around in a hat that doesn't exist and all. But hey, what do I know? Maybe the bullet doesn't exist either. I guess there's only one way to find out... That's right! Another in depth google search.

Hey, if I'm not mistaken, you changed her color scheme slightly. It's less intense, I feel. As for the color choices themselves, everything that needs to stand out does, and everything else that doesn't isn't so subdued that it's overlooked. I gotta say, I think it's quite the improvement.

As for the hat not existing, if you want to make that hat, you go ahead and follow that box shaped dream. And if anyone gets in your way, just shoot them. Just like the Americans of old™ did!

Yo. Hold up. Wait a minute. Is this "Manifest Destiny™"? Did the Americans of old™ really SLAUGHTER™ all those people just so someone, in the future, would have the opportunity to make a hat, shaped like a box, with the word "ASS" printed on it? Was that what this was all leading up to? One must ask oneself; Where does the blood end and the ass begin?

staticomics responds:

Thanks for the art feedback, I really wanted to make it stand out with the color but not too intense. You have very interesting comments and they are cool to read.

[Hi, freinds!]

"Friend" is a bit of a strong word. I'd say "Loose Acquaintance" is more accurate.

I should also mention, I like the little eye movement there. You could've just had him waving. You didn't have to do that, but you did. It's a nice touch.

JustMcFluffyButt responds:

Thanks for the comment, I'll make sure to do better next time!

[Eyes Cream]

"Would you eat that which has sentience?"

Well, that depends. What flavor?

BillyBinx responds:

The taste of thought!

[Dungeon Warrior (Skull and Panic)]

Finally, I can play dodgeball in color! Thank you for this gift, o gracious Just! You may not think that you've done much, but I assure you there is a world of difference between a game of dodgeball with and without color!

JustRaiho responds:

I agree 100% thanks for the comment :D

[Woolly Bear]

Ah, Woolly Bears! One of my favorite types of caterpillar™. (Also known as that weird fuzzy moving candy we used to eat as children. ...Not that I did that or anything...) Did you know that you're apparently supposed to be able to tell how long winter is going to be by examining their fur? I've tried it, I don't think it works.

Lexissketches responds:

Yes Ive heard of that legend!

[Freemancraft]

He looks like he's in pain...

Beatumpop responds:

he's got an itchy nose