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[Bitey Tries To Get Her Beef Moist]

This fills me with rage. How did you manage to do this to me?

Also, horseradish is legit.

[That Sweet Fool]

You know, this really comes off as gentle and romantic. That is until you see it through her perspective, and you come to realize that she's actually saying this to a giant piece of candy corn, in which case this becomes vile, factually wrong, and kind of kinky.

Yajuro responds:

We do love candy corn lmao

[I Got These for You]

How lovely! If only more folks could be so thoughtful nowadays.

Retinacyst responds:

Thank you.

[[FRESH MELONS]]

Melon Time™

[smash]

My uncle says, every time a musician smashes a guitar, a devil gets its horns.

[Ginger]

Yo, check it out! Someone put a wig on this basketball!

[pine time]

HERE TO BRING PAIN...apple!

[Nefelder Nymph]

Now that's a grub I'd let crawl around in my oatmeal!

Quirky comments aside, I wish I had some actual critique for you, but every time I look at one of your monsters, I realize real quick that I don't have anything that I could possibly add to the conversation. You've got a solid imagination, and most of your color choices are superb. At least in my opinion. I also quite enjoy the lore and worldbuilding that you've been giving to your creatures. So I guess all I can say is keep doing what you're doing.

And if I'm not mistaken, you've been scouted! I'm quite happy for you. Hopefully, you'll start to see more comments other than mine popping up around these parts.

Take care of yourself and stay safe.

Azpher-Omega responds:

Aaah thank you!! Thats so nice ^o^ Well whenever you have something to say I usually like critiques and questions, and if you ever want to see more worldbuilding my discord has most of my WIP documents! And I hope so too, I love comments like these :]

[Agony]

Yeah, I'd be in agony too, if I had a tongue that looks like a god dang daikon! Wouldn't even be able to go to an ice cream shack without being harshly judged! And making out? Forget it. "Sorry, baby... I thought I could love you for you, but your tongue is just too big, gross, and hardy for me to deal with! In the end, I guess I just wanted someone normal. But don't worry, I bet the next person you meet will be able to love you." Who's the real monster in that scenario? All you wanted was acceptance, but all you got was a harsh reminder of human conformity. People are jerks! Who needs 'em!? Forget about 'em! You just get out there and be your best self! I believe in you, you daikon tongued freak of nature!

[BIO-KILLER HOPPER PAGES 19-22]

So far, so good! Those last set of pages left me a little worried that you were about to jump the gun and show too much of your hand. It’d be no fun if you cut to the chase with so little build up. But things seem to be escalating at a pretty steady pace. Good job.

JoJoFlynn responds:

Haha no worries, I wouldn't wanna cut to the fun stuff just yet! We're slowly but surely getting there.
Thanks a lot man!